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New Akatsuki:chapter 9 by ~DaisukenAi:iconDaisukenAi:



"And then,the kunai went straight into the target!" the young boy exclaimed.
“Good job.” The blonde hokage chuckled.Then dove his chopsticks into a bowl of ramen.
“Yeah,yeah.He celebrates when he got the target on strike.Though,he can’t do a single jutsu.And misses his shot most of the time.” Another blonde,a teenager explained,annoyed,as she ate her ramen in the seat next to the young boy.Pushing her free hand into the black hair of him.
"Hayai" the blonde stated calmly. "He's still in the acedemy.Only two years so far,of course,it may get annoying to an angsty chuunin." he grinned at his daughter. "But I remember back when the only jutsu you could do,was the substitution jutsu.And the only thing you could throw,was a couple of shuriken.

"I'm not in the acedemy dad,I graduated two months ago,remember?" Hikaru pointed out,but his comment went unnoticed,the hokage and his daughter were too busy being caught in an electro-statical fight.
The teenager raised an eyebrow."So?I was way younger then Hikaru was when I could only do those things." she argued,starting to get dangerously close to 'extreme annoyance.'
"He should spend less time playing stupid little ninja games,and more actually training to be a ninja."

Hikaru attempted a punch at his sister,but she of course caught the punch and turned to him."Wanna settle this outside,Hikaru?" she mumbled.

The father stood up,slamming his flat palms against the find wood of the table."Quit it you two,especially you,Hai-chan." he said through gritted teeth,not trying to yell at his children.
Hayai let go of her brother's fist,and scooped some ramen from the bowl into her mouth."Just watch it,punk brother." she mouthed to him as their dad had his head practically buried in the bowl of ramen.

"I'll surpass you one day." he mouthed back."You're just lucky you're older than me."

Hayai smiled."Age has nothing to do with anything." she graduated to a whisper.







"Hello~ Yuu-chan!" DeiKuru greeted her parnter from the bed as he walked into the room.
"Never....call me that...again...." he grunted and sat at the corner of the bed."You called me here,right?"

DeiKuru nodded and scooted a bit closer to him."Just thought I'd get to know my parnter more,that's all,un."

Yuudai crossed his arms."I'd rather not...let you know too much about me." he faced towards DeiKuru,shifting his body as well and still crossing his arms.

DeiKuru gave a slight smirk."And why would that be,un?".Her eyes started to narrow.'Is there something I shouldn't know about him?Or is he just a secretive person....'
She glared as his lips slowly moved.



Dinner was over at the hokage's house.Now Hikaru was off playing with his acedemy friends,and Hayai was out on a mission.
Leaving the hokage by himself,to reflect again,about the issue of the new Akatsuki that Akemi had reported to him.
"Taiko..." he muttered aloud."I just cant beleive Taiko would be one to join that organazation....he had always reminded me of Hikaru.And I bet if they knew eachother,they would be best of friends.But...then he disappeared....and now...I know where." he said,standing up from his chair in the dinner table."With that evil group..." he grunted pounding his fist on the table."And Kamawazu,and Rukia  are gone too?!They're with them,I just know it...Kamawazu was a skilled chuunin,able to handle any situation without showing anything.And he had incredible abilities...and DeiKuru....always smiling no matter what.She was the first one to greet Taiko,and..they becameinseperable." he talked to himself,bringing his hand to his head slowly."And I bet thats where they are..." he whispered.
He sat down again."Its sad...when you have lost so many people,that you cared about greatly..." he mumbled roughly with his head pressed against his hands.He glanced over to a picture of him,Hikaru,Hayai,and...a woman with black hair.All smiling,all happy.Then to another one,the same,except the woman was gone,and Haiya had been giving a blank look.He could imagine Haiya's voice,saying,"Sure is."


"Come on Yuudai,you have to say something.It gets annoying when you stare at me with your arms crossed.....and not saying anything,un." DeiKuru complained,poking Yuudai in his arm,which quickly pulled away at her touch.
Yuudai finally turned his head away.
"Yuu-chan!" DeiKuru whined again,hoping to get his attention by calling him that.
"You're more annoying than her..." he grunted,leaving the room.
"Damnit Yuudai!Stop being such an ass!" she yelled,starting to run out but stopped by Kamawazu,and of course Hina following after him.
"Where's Taiko?And Hallow?" they both,surprisingly,asked in unison.
"How the hell should I know....un?" DeiKuru argued,trying to get past them.
"Because you're the supposed leader of this damn organazation!" Hina responded,holding DeiKuru still with her arms on her shoulders.
DeiKuru looked away."Well I have no idea.They're probably outside or something,un." DeiKuru whispered.
"You have to help us find them." Kamawazu told her,already turning around,exiting the room.
DeiKuru sighed,"Fine,un."
'Why do I always get mixed up in these stupid things....gah.'

Hina slid her hands which were on DeiKuru's shoulders down to her hands,"Then lets fucking go already." she said,rather harshly,and started running in the direction Kamawazu went in.Pulling DeiKuru along.

Taiko thrashed at the vines that were wrapped around his feet with the only sharp weapon he possessed,a 5-inch blade.It wasn't working though,the vines kept on constricting around his ankle.Up to the point where the circulation was cut off.His legs stop wriggling and he closed his eyes,gritting his teeth together from the feeling of the circulation being hardly cut off in both legs.
Hallow was frozen a few feet away from the sight of Taiko in pain from the hole that held what looked like a venus fly trap.The most terrible thing,the half white,half black boy that was arising from the plant,it seemed as if one side was grinning,the other one was trying to stop.She turned her head the other way and held her hand up to her mouth,closing her eyes.'Taiko...come on.You can beat a couple of vines can't you...?Do it....for me...please...' she kept on uttering thoughts and let out a short shreik,then she finally fainted.She fell slowly,it seemed as if she was in slow motion at the fall.But she didnt hit the ground.She was caught by the arms of her brother just as she was about to fall to the floor.
©2007-2009 ~DaisukenAi
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Author's Comments

A look into Konoha,and the lives of the new Akatsuki members outside of the sand village :3

I think I made the hokage TOO caring for Taiko...XD
But,its supposed to be like that....sorta....I guess....

Mell wanted me to have YuudaixDeiKuru in this one but....I'M SORRY! I JUST CANT! T~T YUUDAI IS TOO ANGSTY!

Anyway,enjoy...yeah....this would look so much better if I could draw manga...lol

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gaaaaaaaaaaasp!!! i have no clue what's going on, but after reading it...i sorta got some of it...i suppose it would have been better to read the first 8 chapters....>.>

Kamawazu!! i remember him X3

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XD Yes,definitely would've been better.
Of course you remember him!You drew him ^w^

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I'll be your ~:sky:~
You can hide underneath me
And come out at night

But you can sky rocket away from me...and never come back if you find another galaxy.
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YUUDAIxDEIKUR FOREVA!!!


Nice Chapter

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